IY: Mah Plans – 24/11


goal shooting goals from open clip artI feel so delicate. Like I’ve been walking on tip-toes over a carpet of needles for a week. I’m not quite sure why I feel that way, but it’s an interesting sensation that I’m (one day) going to find a way to sneak into a novel and/or short story. Emotions and sensations like this shouldn’t be wasted! Everything is fodder! Remember that. ;-)

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So what have I been up to? Let’s see, shaaaaaall we?

Last week

Ensure each blog host has a complete pack of info, including images
Done. I’ll held off on this until yesterday trying to eke things out as long as possible, but I can’t wait now. People need to have their data, just in case.

Prepare KDP for ebook release including all uploads
Done. All I need to do is hit ‘go.’

Make changes to the Silk Over Razor Blades blog page
Sorted. This page is now the go-to page for excerpts of this novel going forward. This means that you may well recognise that text from other promotional materials, but the information at the head and foot of the page regarding the text is now up to date. I’ll only need to change it when I know which way my luck swings with Angry Robot.

This Week

I’m a bit behind with the paperback if I want to be ready for 1 December release, but there really is no point in rushing at this stage. Things must be as close to perfect as I can get them with my current skill set and facilities.

  1. Chase up final wrap around cover in correct dimensions and upload to CreateSpace
  2. Order proof copies of book
  3. Design bookmark for prize winners and be ready to order (do NOT order until status is confirmed)

That’s it now. Come December this will reach it’s peak one way or another and I can begin to focus on other things. I just need to get through this week.

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IY: Silk Over Razor Blades – Primary Timeline Excerpt


Still no word following my big news, but I see no harm in continuing with my schedule.  The way I see it, I’m going to keep everything moving as planned right up until the last possible moment. I still sweat every time I think about it though.

Today’s little treat is an excerpt from the novel itself. Before that, however, I’d like to give you the blurb. This is the text you’ll find on the back cover of the novel should I be the one to release it.

Lenina Miller, ditsy and pampered bride to be, wants nothing more than to walk down the aisle in her scandalous red dress to the gasps and awed stares of friends and family. Her plans are shattered when a late night mugging not only scars her face and neck, but drops her in the centre of a frenzied police investigation to apprehend the attacker before he strikes again.

On the field of battle in 30 BC, Saar, son of Yafeu, sacrifices his life for his sovereign, Queen Cleopatra VII of Egypt. Betrayed by the man he loves, forced to watch his country burn under Octavian’s hostile takeover, Saar’s agonising death appears to Lenina with all the lucid force of a true memory.

Two lives, separated by thousands of years, brought together through one night of violence.

Haunted by the memories of a man long dead, Lenina finds her body transforming, her appetites for food and flesh magnified to terrifying proportions. As the attentions of the investigating detective force her to choose between lust and love, Lenina also finds herself a target. The vampire who attacked her knows she survived and will stop at nothing to finish the job he started.

I hope that’s an exciting teaser for you. I hope reading that gives you even the faintest glimmer of how I’m busting out of my seat to hit ‘go’ on Amazon and make this book available for you. I’m sitting on my hands because I can’t do that yet. I need to wait just a liiiiiittle while longer.

In the meantime I can give you this teaser.

From that blurb you’ll gather that Silk Over Razor Blades features two central characters. One from the present day and one from the past. The present day protagonist, Lenina Miller, is the primary timeline and it’s a snippet form her story that I’m going to leave you with today.

I guess that’s all that’s left to say beyond the fact that my giveaway is still running.

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And now, with no further ado:

Lenina drummed her fingertips against the table. Anger roughened her voice. ‘Not everything is about this stupid wedding.’

‘Wow, okay. But it’s all you’ve talked about for months. Nothing else exists right now except flowers, horse-drawn carriages and white doves.’

She wondered if Saar ever worried about such mundane things as weddings. Tears gathered in her eyes and ran free, splashing against the laptop. ‘I’ve done such horrible things. I’m turning into a monster.’
Nick actually smiled. ‘Every woman gets a bit stressed when planning something like this. But you’re not a monster.’

‘No, you don’t understand—’

He grabbed her hand and held it. His fingers brushed hers and she realised he was stroking her engagement ring. ‘I haven’t made any vows yet,’ he whispered, ‘but I’m with you for better or worse. Nothing you can do or say will take away what we have. Tell me what’s got you hissing like a koperkapel.’

She arched an eyebrow at him.

‘A type of snake from back home.’

Lenina looked away from her fingers. She met Nick’s eyes and saw the sincerity there, the love. The thin film of sweat on his cheeks and forehead made his skin shine while the heat gave him a warm glow.

He squeezed her hand. ‘Tell me.’

‘I’m a vampire.’

He blinked at her.

‘The man in the park. When he bit me he turned me into a vampire. I think. Or perhaps it’s when I drank his blood. I don’t know. But I do know that I’m a vampire now. Or God-Touched – they never say vampire – is that the wrong word? I don’t know.’ By the time she finished speaking, Lenina had to gasp to breathe.

Nick squeezed her hands. ‘Come on, babe. Is this a joke? You don’t even believe in that stuff.’

‘I didn’t, but then I found this website and it had all this information that matched my dreams and—’

‘Dreams?’

She took a deep breath. No matter how she tried to explain it, Lenina knew it wouldn’t make sense.

‘It doesn’t matter. None of it’s important except the first bit. I’m a vampire.’

Nick pulled back and crossed his arms. ‘Right. So you drink blood now?’

Lenina saw the woman on the park again. The glassy eyes. Bloodied throat. With the image came a name, floating up like an air bubble from the oceanic depths of her mind. Pauline Lock. Though she had no idea how, Lenina knew the name belonged to the dead woman.

She bit her lip. ‘Yes. I’ve already done it.’

‘You drank blood?’

A nod. ‘Today. In the park. I killed a woman. I kicked her dog.’

Nick stood, hunching his shoulders against his ears. His voice trembled, a soft stream of Afrikaans expletives before dipping back into English. ‘That’s a really shitty joke, Lenina.’ He turned on his heel. ‘I’m going upstairs.’

Silk Over Razor Blades, coming soon.

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Raven’s November Indie eBook Review: Hooked (By the Billionaire)


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Credit: KC Falls

Author: KC Falls
Title: Hooked: By the Billionaire (Wet Book 1)
Genre: Romantic Erotica
ASIN: B00HHAOSHC
‘Fed up with the ‘Hell’s Kitchen’ pace of her life, Lara takes on a job as a private chef in the hope that she can see some of the world solo and free from restaurant life. She doesn’t expect the job to come with a South Florida player who is everything she’s trying to flee. He’s spoiled rotten, with a swollen ego massaged by every babe who crosses his red carpet path. She’s not so sure about the pet monkey,either. That seems a little cruel.
Morgan is ready for a life with some meaning other than pain. He’s tired of a lot of things about himself including what he knows Lara instantly hates. His future will be different. He’s on his way to take his share of his family’s legacy and make peace with the unthinkable trauma of his emotionally crippling past. For reasons he can’t put into words, he needs to convince Lara what she assumes about him is wrong. Or at least wrong from that point on.’

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Cover:

I think, maybe, I’ve missed a trick where covers are concerned. For all the research I did before the Meeting Each Other series kicked off, I still feel that other covers out there do a better job of meeting the expectation of readers. This is a nice enough cover. Classic bare-chested man, with a background that suits the story within. My personal preference is for more arty covers, or covers that are less about skin and moody avoidance of the camera lens, but I think I’m in a minority there. Ah well. The text is big and clear, the colours don’t jar my eye, so all in all, the cover does what it should. Nothing incredible to mark it out though.

Story:

Leaving her old job is a poor, under appreciated chef in a restaurant Lara picks up a far better one. On a private yacht which will take her up and down the oceans for huge lengths of time, all while serving meals to the deliciously rich captain Morgan (not the rum). Straight away she has his number, but he falls for her somewhat quicker and deeper than he ever anticipated and has to spend the rest of the boat journey convincing her that he’s not all bad. And certainly not as bad as she thinks he is. Their budding relationship comes to a head while out to see and an accident forces Lara to confront the possibility of a future without Morgan in it.

Characters:

Lara: Master of bad decisions (with regards to men), talented and a bit no-nonsense (thank goodness!). She fancies the pants off the guy but isn’t going to let herself fall into the trap of changing just to make him happy or suit what she believes is his preferred type. I like that in a girl. 😉
Morgan: Best. Name. Ever. I don’t know why but I have a soft spot for males characters with this name which makes me useless at staying impartial. Damnit. I love his passion, I love his drive and though the dark/tortured past bit is something I’ve seen before, I like how it has shaped his current personality in a good way.

Eroticism:

Mmmm, yes. 😉 A careful blend of Lara’s shy naiveté mixed with Morgan’s smexxy-vibe… I actually would have liked a bit more sexing from these too. Not that the story is lacking without it, more that I was actually pretty keen to see this pair get down and dirty. Just because they were a good match.

Overall experience:

I gobbled this up in the space of days. I found it a really easy read with formatting that wasn’t at all disruptive. I think, in places it could have stood to be eeeeeeever so slightly shorter. Example: the conversations between Lara and her friend were nice to have, I could have still followed what I needed to know without them. But I still enjoyed my read very, very much.
My only gripe is the turning point around the accident. It made sense given what there were out on the sea for but I felt it was missing something. Even though the fact of the accident wasn’t contrived – because it wasn’t – something about it felt forced. I can’t put my finger on it, but, for me, it needed something just a lil more to stop me remembering I was reading a book, rather than sneak-peeking into these peoples’ lives.

Final score:

Average across all scores is 3.6, which rounds out to 3.5 fireballs.

I will look up the rest of the series because I want to see what’s next for Morgan and Lara. I’m also hoping that the scenes that follow, keeping it together are a little less something-I-can’t-quote-put-my-name-on-so-twee-will-have-to-do.

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RS: I Haz Planz 20/11


goal shooting goals from open clip artWant to know how to drive yourself complete nuts? Promise your kids (and yourself) that you’ll tape (ha, there’s an old term for ya!) every episode of their favourite show and tweak it so that adverts and extra crap at the start and finish isn’t included in the file product. Listen to the opening theme over and over (and over) again and then realise that there are a brand new set of episodes that you didn’t know about. *head desk*

So that was my week. -_-

As to the rest, I’m sure there are lots of other things I’ve done worthy of note. Please let there be things worthy of note….

Last Week
~Complete line edits for Slippers & Chains: Sugar Dust
Done. Can’t really say much more than that, it’s done.

~Make required changes to ‘Simone & Mr Bradford’ based on beta comments
Nope.

~Send one review request for any story in the Meeting Each Other Series
Next…!

~Ensure this month’s newsletter goes out on time
A day late. Better than never I guess.

~Attempt 500 words daily (I know, I know) of NaNoWriMo project if other jobs for the day are complete
On Tuesday night I was par. Now not so much.

And I know why my list looks like this too. I spent last weekend in bed. I won’t lie, I managed to get up long enough to go with the Funk Master to see the Christmas lights go on (which I hated by the way, I’m a fucking scrooge -_-). Beyond that I was in bed with a fever, not eating, not drinking and not actually sleeping all that much either.

So I wrote. Writing was much easier than anything else on this list and, if I’m honest, it kept me sane. Again for the beginning of the week.

Writing a first draft is one of the best parts about writing for me. I’m utterly free to do whatever I want and my fingers just guide me. I don’t even have to think all that hard, most of the time the story is there. So it was easier than going through my lists for reviewers, or tweaking existing products in need of fine editing.

On the one hand, yey me for writing stuff while feeling shitty. On the other… I should try to get to grips with some of the stuff I’m slacking on.

This Week
Another email from Breathless Press. This one about marketing and promotion. Funnily enough this is the hardest thing I’ve had to do for them so far. I hate selling myself with words (blurbs and bios) – I’m very, very bad at it, even if it’s a skill I’m learning.  I understand the necessity of it – which is actually why I started these things looooooong before that email arrived – but I need the help of professionals to get things sounding right. I know that much.

  1. Finishing marketing and promotion jobs for Breathless Press
  2. Make editing tweaks on Simone & Mr Bradford
  3. Keep up with NaNoWriMo

That’ll do. I just don’t seem to be getting better so at least putting NaNo in as a goal means I’ll be doing something productive when lying in bed feeling sorry for myself.

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RS: Learning From Editing pt2 – Your Story Can Always Be Better


Continuing my new series on what I’ve learned from editing, I want to talk about part of the editing process.

We talk about editing as if it’s a finite thing. As if you’ll reach a point, be totally happy and relieved to let go of your manuscript. In my experience this has most certainly not been the case.

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When I wrote Slippers & Chains I knew it had to be edited to within an inch of it’s life because my plan was to self publish it. This was the very first time I managed to pin down exactly what my editing process is.

I printed that bad boy and worked from hard copy smoothing out plot kinks, ensuring there was a clear character arc, giving the story suitable highs and lows. I thought it was done then, but it wasn’t.

Then I went through the bugger again to do all the fine stuff like dialogue and cutting out repetition, ensuring POV was consistent and watching out for swathes of boring shit that readers would skip. Not to mention spending ages agonising over whether I should use ‘pussy’ over ‘cunt’ (I used both in the end). I thought it was done then, but it wasn’t.

cute cartoon penguine at a computer from OpenClipArtThen I had to line edit, making sure sentences didn’t clunk, that my meaning was clear, that my grammar made sense throughout. I thought it was done then, but it wasn’t.

Next I sent it to beta readers (including The Funk Master). I left the manuscript with them and agonised over what they might think of it and then rounded up all those comments and made buckets of changes. I thought it was done then… you get where I’m going with this?

When I sent it to Breathless Press I thought it was done. I thought there would be a few tweaks here and there and that they would run it pretty much as it was after they chose to take me on. Boy how wrong I was.

The first pass on line edits added quite a bit to the manuscript. How much you ask. Why… this much:

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And yes, if you don’t get this meme, sorry. You need to do a bit of looking into retro anime. 😉 c.1989 Those of you who DO know the meme… yes, I know full well he said 9,000 in the English dub. He also said 8,000 in the original Japanese. So there. :p

That’s when I’m normally fighting tooth and nail to cut words out. But these words, dotted throughout the novella add depth, emotion, tone, background… things that I wasn’t lacking exactly, but now are far more obvious through the course of the story.

Anyway. I sent my line edits back a week ago and now I won’t see the Slippers & Chains again. Not until it’s packaged up with it’s stunning cover and ready to be sold. But it’s still not finished. Not to me. There are still bits I want to tweak and fiddle with each time I look at the damn thing and that, my friends, will always be the case.

I’ve not seen frozen yet, but I get the feeling that this song (or at least the chorus) is particularly appropriate here.

let it go meme, a'la frozen

And yes… I am paraphrasing just a little bit.

And that’s me done for the day.

Sorry about all the memes. You can tell when I’ve found a new toy I really like. ;-).

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