Should Authors Review Other Authors?


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Book reviews are important. Whether you’re Stephen King, Jeffery Archer, Stephanie Meyer or EL James, book reviews form a vital component of an author’s career. If you’re… I dunno… Alice Smith from up the road plugging copies of your debut vampire romance, featuring talking unicorns and aliens, reviews are important to you too. They’re what convince readers to take a chance on you. They’re how the word is spread about the tale you have to tell. And, perhaps, more importantly, they are a means to boost flagging confidence.
People are interested in reading your work. They care. They enjoyed it enough to spend time telling others about the experience.

Those are good reviews.

But bad reviews? These can turn away potential readers. Frustrate existing ones. They can take your reputation and grind it into the earth. Bad reviews can destroy your confidence. Steal your mojo. Even make you lay down your pen.

Anne Rice has recently been on a massive campaign to encounter the implementation of named reviews on Amazon. Not because she wants to get rid of bad reviews, but because she feels the anonymous nature of the current review system gives rise to needlessly venomous reviews and even fake ones from disgruntled readers or unscrupulous, competing authors.

While my thoughts on that campaign (see Anne’s Facebook if you want to know more) are for another day, it does bring me neatly onto my main point.

little pink worm reading a book; bookworm from OpenClipArtI’m an author. I write books.
I’m a reader. I read books. I also review them.
This year one of my self imposed challenges is to read 12 Indie books over the course of 12 months. Raven is also going to read 12 books. This challenge encourages me to review the books in full here, and in brief wherever I bought them.

Now… some of these books have been awful. I can’t lie. No editing, flat characters, wishy-washy plot and abysmal formatting. Some books have been so amazing that I stopped my own work (more on that later in the month!) for the two days it took to yank my head from the hypothetical sand. They scared me with their incredible level of professionalism and talent to the point that I doubted my own ability. And still do.

All these books will get reviewed. They’ll be scored based on the system I came up with at the start of the year and I’ll talk about why each book got what.

But should I post them? Is it fair? Do I have any right to potentially hamper another person’s career because my take on their work isn’t favourable? Should I only post the good ones? Should I not add links or refuse to name names just in case I upset someone?

I don’t have any trouble reviewing larger names and mainstream authors. Perhaps because they’re big enough that I feel they can handle it. But small press authors? Indie authors? I’m sensitive to them and the potential damage I could do because I’m in the same boat. That, if I’m honest, is what this post boils down to.

But will my humble option really make that much difference?
To a potential buyer of a JK Rowling book? Probably not.
To a buyer searching through the freebie section of Smashwords? Maybe.
Reviews count.

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I’ve actually entered into a very pleasant dialogue with one of the authors I reviewed. Martyn Stanley. He contacted me after finding the review (I really should ask how he found it) and thanked me for taking the time to be so thorough and honest; even if the book wasn’t entirely to my taste. He’s even given me an ARC of the next one in the series which I have agreed to read. ^_^ This tells me that even less than glowing reviews can lead to good things.

Aaah well… for now I’ll continue to write reviews and post them here. Whether they’re good or bad.
However, I will also be more sensitive about the language I use, wary of the fact that somewhere along the line, these authors may read my words, after all, Martyn wasn’t the only one to contact me following a review here.

I know not all books will be to my taste, just as my writing won’t suit everybody. but I can be respectful about the feedback I leave, which is key. After all… I’d want them to do the same for me. 😛

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Ileandra’s March Indie eBook Review: 7 Of 7 A Modern Day Fariy Tale


Sooo! With the end of the A2Z Challenge we’re all back to normal. Just to let you know, posts will continue to go up around 7am from myself and Raven from now on (she’s decided that there’s a more interesting crowd in the am rather than the pm *shrugs*)
I’ll post Mondays and the 1st and 3rd Saturday. Raven will post Thursday and the 2nd and 4th Saturday. We’ll fight between us over who gets the 5th Saturday as and when that comes up.

Also, because we’re both so behind with our book reviews, the next few posts from us are likely to be catch up posts, getting us up to date with posting them. Hope that’s all right with you guys!

Right… let’s go.


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Author: E Perkins
Title: 7 of 7 A Modern Day Fairy Tale
Genre: Um… o.O Fantasy?
ISBN: 9781310359118
‘A father who is driven by an obsession that he is destined to create a powerful and wealthy dynasty of seventh sons casts out an incredibly beautiful daughter and a talented eighth son. While these children are the key to the fairy tale, they are not the threat to the father’s empire. So who is?’


Later this month I’ll be talking about my reluctance to review books I don’t enjoy. It seems counter productive and cruel on some levels. But this is the challenge I set myself and this is the book I read in March, so I’m going to review it.

…Strap in.


Cover:

4.5 starsThe cover coaxed me in. That’s good because it did it’s job. The silhouettes of seven men in a line of receding perspective was excellent and I really enjoyed the simplicity of it. The text is bold, strong and clear though the ‘Modern Day Fairy Tale’ part reads more like a subtitle rather than part of the main title. That’s my only complaint really, hence the half star docked.

Story:

two starsI’m going to be blunt; I have no idea what the story was.

Yes, I know what happened, but that’s somewhat different to being able to sum up the story in a few lines like I would usually.

Jacob V has eight sons. As he himself is the seventh son of a seventh son, his aim was to father seven sons (and a single daughter) of his own and through doing so, create a race of ‘super humans.’ However the eighth son blows out all of these plans and, as a result, is locked away in a section of the house and largely forgotten about. Similarly the mother is locked away with a second daughter as punishment for ruining his plans; they are all ‘evil’ and working against him.

Right. With you so far.

The eight son, Jeremy, discovers a network of tunnels (venting system?) out of his room which allows him to explore the house and by doing so eventually learns of the rest of his family and his imprisoned mother and sister Jena. He builds a warm relationship with them both until Jacob V learns of it and has the mother killed and both kids booted from his house.

Still with you.

But then it just got wieeeeerd! Leaving behind the perfectly interesting story of the radical father and his rather kooky plans, to follow the two outcast kids. And nothing they did had any impact at all on the father. Not really. Highlight blank space below for the spoiler:

Instead these two go off, live their lives and the real problem is back in the house with Jacob V’s seventh son (Jacob VI) and his seventh son (Jacob VII). Confused yet? This kid with his psychic abilities who can speak to his aunt and his father telepathically and whisper messages to them across thousands of miles, blah, blah, blah. o.O

It feels like this book was a means to talk as many forms of abuse as possible and pile each one on the heads of two people. While I enjoy the study of different personality types responding to difficult emotional, physical and spiritual trials, none of it felt real. It was too big, too overblown, over done. And there didn’t seem to be any real consequences for all the bad stuff. I’m a big advocate of ‘write what you want‘ but I do feel that if you’re going to write incest into a book (which was also rape) there needs to be some sort of consequence for the perpetrator (and no, that’s not a spoiler, it’s in the extended Smashwords blurb for the book).

I also feel like there was so much story to tell that there needed to be more than 60k words to do it in. Or, at the very least, huge chunks of the beginning could have been skipped to make space for explaining (more satisfactorily) the things which happen in the last third of the book. As it is, a lot of it feels to come from nowhere and, even for a fantasy novel, isn’t very credible.

Characters:

one starJena and Jeremy feel like cardboard cut outs of ‘good’ and ‘bad’ people mashed together with a (too large) cast of other stereotypes; the lazy rich kid, the kind and loving nun, the sadistic nun with a chip on her shoulder, the owner of a gentleman’s club who really isn’t a bad guy after all, even the ‘special kid’ with learning difficulties who comes out of his shell when treated right. And those are just a few.

I also understand why all of Jacob V’s kids had names beginning with ‘J’ but it became very hard to keep up. And then outside the family were more names beginning with ‘J.’ By the end I had a very hard time just keeping up with who was who, which led to lots of going back and re-reading lines. This reinforces the thought that the characters aren’t real enough; if they were, similarities in names would have made no difference because personalities would have leapt off the (digital) page with actions and dialogue.

Overall experience:

one starUnfortunately, I was far too distracted trying to figure out what was going on to enjoy this book. It is riddled with typos and grammatical issues and while the formatting is very clean and thorough; the whole thing needs an edit. Structural and content.

Final score:

two starsAverage across all scores comes to 2.125 stars.
I feel like there was so much potential in this book to be awesome. The start, though slow, was really promising, but then it just went off on a bizarre tangent and never really recovered until the end when the happenings back with the father were brought back in as an afterthought. Which makes you wonder… if the ‘real story’ was back in the house, why were there thousands of words dedicated to Jena and Jeremy?
Short answer: no idea.

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April A2Z 2014 Roundup (& I Haz Planz – wc 01/05)


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WE MADE IT!

May. First of the month. Maaaaaaaan this has been a long time coming. Not that I haven’t enjoyed April, but I’m stunned at how much effort it’s taken to get here. *wipes brow* But we did it. That’s what counts.

What an amazing month it’s been. Lots of lovely new blogs read, followed, liked and so forth while lots of new faces have appeared too. And of course all you regulars have stuck by me. Thanks for that. 😉

This challenge, for me (and Ileandra, I suppose) has been a successful experiment. It’s show that we’re able to formulate a plan and stick to it, despite all the other things rushing around our heads at the same time. And, because the majority of our posts were written (slightly) in advance, we got a good headstart on our other projects too.
Those of you who follow the Twitter and/or Facebook would have had regular updates from myself and Illy about Slippers & Chains and Silk Over Razor Blades. Those of you on my mailing list would have even seen the fabulous new ‘smut with brains’ logo. Don’t worry… if you’re not on the list I’ll be unveiling it here at some point. Just letting the subscribers make a few tweaks with me first. 😉

For those of you who were unable to follow the challenge day by day, this post has a quick list of all the post titles across the challenge, with a corresponding link. Hope it helps. I’ll even note if it was me or Ileandra who wrote it…. ’cause I’m nice like that.

A: Awesome! (IY)
B: BWFFs (IY)
C: ‘Cum’ vs ‘Come’ Is there Really A Difference? (RS)
D: Delegate, Bitches! (RS)
E: Egypt Is So Cool! (IY)
F: Fucking Bad Language (Teehee!) (RS)
G: Getting Old, The Big 30 (IY) – including a flash fiction competition, closing date 8 May 2014
H: Heaven Is A… (RS)
I: Interviews (IY)
J: Jokes And Humour In Erotica (RS)
K: Keeping It Real (RS)
L: Look At Me, Look At Me! (IY)
M: Music To Write To (IY)
N: Never Give Everything Away (RS)
O: Open Or Closed Door? (IY)
P: Photo Paraphernalia (RS)
Q: Questioning Yourself (IY)
R: Ronrey (RS)
S: Slippers & Chains Excerpt (RS)
T: Team Work (RS)
U: Usually Unusual (RS)
V: Vampires Can Do What? (IY)
W: WIP Excerpt (What I Took Away) (IY)
X: Xiblophobe (IY)
Y: Yes Sir, No Sir (RS)
Z: Zoning Out (IY)

There. Done. 🙂


Now. Since that’s over (!) time to get back to normal and talk about goals.

During the course of April I sent Slippers & Chains out to betas. A small cluster of people who agreed to read it through and offer comments so I could make it as good as possible before querying.
Yesterday was the deadline and I’ve had back three wonderful sets of feedback. I’d like to thank Glen, Shelia and The Funk Master for taking the time to read those words and get them back to me in decent time. I’ll always be grateful for your perspectives, some of which are already making significant changes to my thoughts on the tale. ^_^
…the rest of you…? *taps watch* :p

Anyway, while I was giving my brain a rest I didn’t do any extra work. Ileandra had control (and still does) of Da Shared Brain to work on Silk Over Razor Blades so I’ve been enjoying my time off.
However…

This Week

I’m not ill (touch wood) and next week is my (and by that I mean the Brain’s) actual birthday. There are a bunch of fun things plan, including two parties (WOO!), so I’d like to do some work in the meantime.

  1. Read through notes received from betas regarding Slippers & Chains. Don’t work them yet… just allow the comments to simmer.

  2. Decide on my next steps regarding the Meeting Each Other series (the last three books, print versions, extras, etc etc…)

  3. Write up my last book review. I’m sure there’s at least one I haven’t done yet…. And since it’s now May and my last posted review was March (February? …no March) I have some catching up to do.

That second one is particularly important because people have actually been buying the other three books.
*gasp* I know, right?
Here… check this out:

Screenshot of Facebook status re book sales.

WOOOOOOOOOOO!

Exactly. So I need to keep that ship sailing smoothly.

For now, however, I’m going to hand the reigns back to Ileandra so she can continuing editing. She wants SORB done by our birthday. Makes sense I guess… that means we actually be able to go out and have a drink that night!
Peace. x

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Zoning Out #AtoZChallenge #AprilA2Z ‘Z’


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I found a new coffee shop the other day. I’ve been eyeing it for ages because it’s not just a coffee place. It’s a coffee and gelato place. Gelato. Squee!

I haven’t managed to have any yet, but I did very much enjoy my chai latte, my waffle and my tiny pot of little red, heart shaped sweets. ^_^ I had a wonderful, quiet corner surrounded by gentle chatter, music and books and I just cracked out the laptop, sat and typed. And typed. And typed. And typed.

It was amazing.

For that hour and twenty minutes I was totally IN THE ZONE. I cranked through four 500 word articles and a few pages of deep editing before the boys woke up and we had to get moving.

I love the zone. And the ‘zone’ the fabled space in which writing flows isn’t always a space. It can be about music, or a comforting piece of clothing, or with your favourite cup of coffee. Just something that helps you get to a headspace where the words flow.

My zone varies. It has to; dependant on what my boys need from me at that moment in time. I find that being flexible in that regard helps me take advantage of the time that I do have as and when it comes.

What’s your zone? Is it a favourite mug with your best hot beverage in it? A comfy chair? A particularly scruffy and holey jumper that you just can’t bear to throw away? A corner in your local library? A certain flavour of crisps? Whatever it is, or if you haven’t found it yet, I promise you; taking advantage of that ‘zone’ will help your productivity no end. Spend some time experimenting and find what works for you. Whether it’s a particular time of day or certain brand of pen, once you know what helps you, you’ll never look back.

Today is the last day of the A2Z Challenge. I’d like to thank all of you who have visited and joined me on this mad journey. I’ve never done anything like this across the blog before (I don’t count NaNoWriMo), but I’m thrilled that I’ve finally done it and I’m already looking forward to next year.
Newer comers and regulars alike, thanks for talking with me, commenting, liking and sharing. You’re all what has made this experience so cool.
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Yes Sir, No Sir #AtoZChallenge #AprilA2Z ‘Y’


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12 Years a Slave

In February I watched 12 Years A Slave. If you’re not familiar with the film, as you’ve been living under a greasy, slimy rock, I’ll just say that this film dramatizes the real life story of a free black man tricked and sold into slavery in the 1800s. He spends 12 years as a slave (eeeyup, clue is in the title) until escaping with a bit of luck and help from a decent man he meets towards the end. A truly brilliant film.

I watched that film in the cinema, got up from my seat and asked the Funk Master for a hug. He wrapped his arms around me and, I won’t lie, I burst into tears. All over his shoulder. He had to steer me out of the aisle and into a corner so people could get by, because I couldn’t handle what I’d just watched. I cried for five minutes.

…don’t tell anybody.

The next day I sat down, opened up the Slippers & Chains Scrivener file and tried to decide if I could keep working on it. For the first time I wasn’t sure if I could.

I’ll explain.

Slippers & Chains is a bit of a comedy drama, but it documents the lives of Daniel Scotney and Karen Owusu a couple (just slightly older than me) who have a D/s relationship. For those unfamiliar, this is the DS part of the acronym BDSM. Dominance and submission.

Karen, a black woman, is the submissive ‘slave’ of Daniel, who is a white man.

cutting style clipart, slavery

Until watching that film I had never considered how that might look to some people. How strange. How potentially racist. How much of a parallel it forms to the plight of black slaves in that time. And let’s not kid ourselves, even if you’re not hot on the subject, you must know that black slave women were often raped by their white masters. There is an element of that to consider and I know full well that some folk in the BDSM community and (out of it), have fantasies about exploring that black/white divide through roleplay.

While editing some of the later chapters of the novella I found myself typing ‘Yes Sir’ and actually wincing. As if I could hear the whip cracking. As if Karen was genuinely terrified for her life and had no choice but to accept what her master wanted lest she be beaten.

Now.. I know full well that this isn’t that type of story. I know that Karen and Daniel have a loving relationship just like any other ‘normal/vanilla/traditional’ relationship. But I think this is a lesson that I need to take heed of:

Be wary.

Not that I should stop writing the story I have in me, but I should be mindful that for me, a story about simply about those two people and their relationship, may not be that for someone else. There may be triggers within them that I don’t intend.

I’m sure there are many other potential triggers with a story like Slippers & Chains. Domestic abuse. Homophobia. Racisim. Sexism.

I suppose this post is just a nod and an acknowledgement. Just my way of letting you know that I know what I’ve done and the potential issues and saying that I hope I don’t cause anybody pain.

I don’t normally apologise for my writing – why the hell should I, it’s fiction – But after watching that film and feeling the way I did, the least I can do is acknowledge it. Steve McQueen didn’t mean to make me sob in the cinema, but he did. I don’t mean to upset any of you, but I’m sure I will, eventually.
Sorry.

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