Reading As A Reader, Reading As A Writer, Reading As An Editor


I picked up a book last week. My absolute favourite author in the world and yet there are several books by him I haven’t read yet. One of them was a movie adaptation from the well known Hammer Horror franchise.

Purple present from OpenClipartI picked up this book because it was written by this particular chap and I opened it up with the same glee one feels when opening up a Christmas or birthday present.

However…

I read the prologue and felt a little strange. I thought; ‘this isn’t his usual style is it? Maybe I haven’t read enough of his knew stuff to know how he writes these days. I should keep going.’ So I read chapter one. Then I thought; ‘this is still a bit weird. That word choice was a bit clumsy, this sentence is poorly constructed. Hell, that was utterly the wrong adjective to use considering the tone he’s trying to convey.’ And I put the book down.

I’ve never put one of this guy’s books down before. Ever. I adore and respect his work too much and I only managed to leave the book on the table for about two hours before I wanted to give it another try.

Half way through and I still felt uncomfortable. That’s when I realised, for the first time, that I’m ruined as a reader. Now and forever more, I won’t be able to read a book without unconsciously editing or critiquing it. That understanding upset me so much that I had to take another break from the book.

After a day or two, after promising myself that I would make a concious effort not not to critique it in my mind, I finished reading it. But only just.

I’ve been working very hard at critiques lately. Not only is it part of The Write Feeling, but it is a valuable process to go through as a writer, because it helps you learn. It prods you to look at your own work with a far more critical eye and that is key. Before things like the Phoenix Writers, the Leicester Writing School and the Sunday Snippets Blog Hop there was a huge part of my skill set missing. Not just in giving a critique, but receiving one. Understanding that the comments are not an all out attack on me, or my precious babies, but a genuine attempt to make said babies as strong as they possibly can be.

I suppose, in knowing this, it’s only natural that my critiquing eye has become sharper, but to find myself mentally checking off issues in the words of an established writer, one that I have loved and respected for years is incredible!

Geology symbol from OpenClipArtIs it natural progression? Is this just what happens when one goes deeper into a hobby or an interest? Certainly when I studied geology at university, I never imagined that my holiday life would be wrecked forever more. I can’t walk passed any exposed strata without having a feel, a scratch (not of me, of the rock! …dirty!) and a guess at what it is. If I had my tools with me I would take dip and strike measurements! With that already in my past I should have suspected something similar might happen, but it still came as a surprise to me.

As you work on your own books, do you find that you think about writing differently? Do you read someone else’s work and start picking at it? Do you look at authors you’ve known and loved and find yourself surprised at what you read?

Don’t get me wrong, I still love this guy and will continue to buy his books, but this makes me dread my bi annual reading of The Lord Of The Rings. o.O

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Reblogged: #CarinaPitch is coming April 4th, 2013


#CarinaPitch is coming April 4th, 2013
Angela James | March 30th, 2013

The Carina Press editorial team will be holding a pitch event on Twitter via the #carinapitch hashtag on Thursday, April 4, 2013 from 8am Eastern to 9pm Eastern.

Last fall, we provided an opportunity for authors to submit their work and get both an expedited response and feedback. We had tremendous response to that submissions call, so we decided to do something that would give authors the chance to get similar feedback and response time. I’d also like to share that, from that submissions call, we found over a dozen manuscripts that we either wanted to acquire or see further revisions for, so it was very successful for both authors and us in that regard. Our ultimate goal is always to find new authors to acquire, not new authors to reject!

Last time, we heard from authors who had submissions pending that they wished they could also have the opportunity to take advantage of that, so we’ve come up with a pitch event that will allow everyone, including those who currently have submissions pending, the same chances. Please read on for details of how the event will work.

On Thursday, Carina Press freelance editors will be monitoring the #carinapitch hashtag for book pitches from authors.

The benefits:

Book pitches chosen by editors will be reviewed by the editor who requested it. Response will be given by May 31st, 2013 and those manuscripts chosen via the #carinapitch will also receive personalized feedback. Please note that we ask authors not to expect paragraphs of feedback, but specific feedback will be offered noting what the editor sees as not working or needing attention. We also would like to emphasize that the nature of this business is subjective, so the editor may provide feedback the author may not agree with. We’re offering insight into why the book doesn’t work for us (should we choose to pass on it, rather than acquiring, which is certainly a possibility!), not providing detailed instructions on how to “fix” any issues we see.

Eligibility to participate:

1) A complete, ready-to-send, manuscript that falls within the commercial fiction genres that we publish. (Please view our submissions guidelines here)

2) You must be prepared to send your manuscript within 3 days of the #carinapitch session. Any manuscripts sent after Sunday, April 7th will still be fairly reviewed by editorial staff, but won’t be eligible for the feedback/accelerated response time.

3) The manuscript you’re pitching must be new material, not previously published material, whether self-published or released via a publisher. New material only will be considered during this event.

4) The manuscript cannot be one that has previously received a pass letter from us.

5) You may pitch more than one project.

How to participate:

1) Wait until April 4th from 8am Eastern to 9pm Eastern, which is when the editors will be monitoring the hashtag.

2) Craft your compelling book pitch into one (no more than two) tweets. Indicate if it’s more than one tweet by using 1/2 and 2/2 so we can piece them together.

3) Post them to Twitter from your account using the #carinapitch hashtag (the only way we’ll know they’re for us!)

Please do not post pitches for one book more than twice during the #carinapitch event. Even if you’re changing your pitch, please pitch the same book no more than twice during the day.

4) Watch for a reply from a Carina Press editor.

5) If an editor lets you know that they’d like to see your submission and your manuscript is NOT currently on submission with us:

a) please follow the submission guidelines here and include all required information. Send your submission to the submissions email, not the editor directly.
b) Make your subject line: #carinapitch Title by Author (genre)
c) Address your query letter to the editor who requested your manuscript
d) At the top of your query letter, please include the Twitter pitch you used and your Twitter name (to help the editor recognize your request & verify that they asked for it)
If more than one editor asks for your submission, you may choose which editor to send to, though you may also wish to indicate the second editor who had interest, in case the first editor chooses not to read it.
e) Send your submission no later than Sunday April 7, 2013

6) If an editor lets you know they’d like to see your submission and your manuscript is already in our queue.

a) Send an email to submissions@carinapress.com
b) Subject line: #carinapitch Existing Submission
c) In the body of the email, please include the Twitter pitch you used and your Twitter name (to help the editor recognize your request & verify that they asked for it).
d) In body of email, please tell us the date you originally submitted your work, the title of the work, the genre and the name you submitted under. It’s helpful if your email comes from the same email address you used to submit the work.
If more than one editor asks for your submission, you may choose which editor to send to, though you may also wish to indicate the second editor who had interest, in case the first editor chooses not to read it.
e) Email us no later than Sunday April 7, 2013

Notes about #carinapitch

You don’t need to direct your tweet to a specific editor. We’ll all be monitoring the hashtag throughout the day. However, if you want to bring it to the attention of an editor you think it’s particularly suited for, you are welcome to do so. At the bottom of this post is a list of participating Carina Press editors and their Twitter IDs.
Please don’t post your pitch more than twice during the day. We know you want to make sure we see it, so we don’t mind if you post it at two different times, but please don’t post one book more than that. This includes not changing your pitch five times and posting it five different ways, please. Two pitches per book, so the hashtag doesn’t become cluttered and allows all authors equal opportunity to be seen. Thank you!
An updated list of what different editors are looking for will be posted here on the blog Monday. You can see editor bios here.
Information about what we publish, our submissions guidelines and specific FAQs can be found here.

Feedback is welcome! Please email us at generalinquiries@carinapress.com if ever you have specific, constructive feedback you’d like to share.

One last (very important) note:

Even if your pitch isn’t selected by an editor, that doesn’t mean your project isn’t right for us. In the end, it’s the words you write in the story that will get us to acquire the book, not the words you wrote for the pitch, so if you’ve written something we publish, please still submit it to us. Your chances of having the manuscript acquired are just as good as those whose pitches we single out!

*Permission to forward this post, use it on blogs and author forums is permitted.*

Participating editors:

Angela James @angelajames

Tina Burns @TinaBurns

Deb Nemeth @DebNemeth

Jeff Seymour @realjeffseymour

Elizabeth Bass @ElizabethBass

Melissa Johnson @MelissJohnson

Gina Bernal @GinaBernal

Alissa Davis @AlissaDenay

Mallory Braus @MalloryBraus

Meredith Giordan @MeredithGiordan

Megan Records @MeganRecords

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Celebrating Milestones Take 3!


This is so lovely. ^_^ Not only am I having a lovely day so far, but I woke up, took a look at the blog and found this.1000 likes banner from wordpressSo it’s time, once again to say thank you.

I only get these little milestone markers because of YOU. Each time you visit, like a post, leave a comment, I feel that I’m connecting with you and loving every second. The fact that WordPress collects all that data and feeds it back to me means I get to see it properly which is wonderful.

So… once more…Thank you note!

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#GoodThingsJar2013 March Update


imageWhat a month! There are soooooooooo many pink slips in that jar. Just LOOK AT IT! This is such a wonderful exercise for me; I’m glad that I’m doing it. Makes a hell of a lot of difference if I’m having a bad day, being able to look at that jar.

So… if I recap, the jar this month includes such delightful tid bits as the sign off of my business plan by my business mentor, working on The Write Feeling website, my boys sleeping through the night, making tasty culinary treats and fun days out with the family. Despite the atrocious weather I’ve had a very pleasant March.

While today is April, I feel I should also mention that I picked up two Hotel Chocolat eggs at half price in John Lewis today. I’m thrilled; because I didn’t buy any Easter eggs, or do anything Easter-ish this year. Well… I ate a couple of bunnies, but I didn’t buy them. :p They were actually for Leon and Michael, but I took a bullet for them and ate one myself. Dave had the other.

Coming up in April, we have the launch of The Write Feeling coming up (yes, yes, I know I haven’t talked about it much; I’m going to soon. Really soon, promise!) as well as more milestones for the boys. I’ll be signing off JSA which will be a massive pink green slip (yes, yes, I am changing the colours each month) in the jar.

How have you guys been getting on? I’ve been busy enough that I’ve not put many updates on Twitter about this (apologies!) but things are calming down a bit now. Hopefully I’ll just have regular bits and bobs that I can plan for which should make getting onto social media, responding to comments and visiting other blogs, possible.

So… have you have a good Easter? What have you been up to? How does your jar look? ^_^

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Sunday Snippets Critique Blog Hop 10


Button for blog hopBritish Summer Time. -_- I bleeding wish!

I’ve lost an hour of sleep with daylight savings and the snow is coming in hard, fast flurries. It’s so cold that I can’t go out without a hat and scarf and all the snowdrops in the front garden have died! BAH!

I know! I’ll cheer myself up with some lovely Sunday Snippets, posing my own and darting around the blogosphere to see yours. I hope you’ve all had a good week and that you’ve been able to achieve all that you were hoping. 🙂

This week, we’re still looking at Walking The Razor’s Edge and this 250 words comes directly after last week. Shawn and Ileandra continue their conversation with regards to kissing. Ooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Ileandra abruptly stopped walking. She felt Shawn’s pull on her arm as he continued half a step before stopping and leaned back slightly on her crutch to compensate. “You want to kiss me?”
“Very much.” He might have been discussing what he wanted for dinner. Shawn’s voice was mild, not in the least bit pressuring or pushing, but the light behind his eyes was anything but. It was hot and searching. “I thought when you dropped that sauce down your chin was a good moment, but you didn’t even notice it. Or outside the cinema when you hugged me; that felt like a good moment. But before I could even lower my head you’d turned aside to stare up the street. You looked like you seen a ghost.”
“Not a ghost,” Ileandra murmured softly.
At the least, she hoped it was not a ghost. But the little bundle of sensations and feelings that were not her own, tucked away at the back of her mind had suddenly come alive again, and with it a feeling that she could point directly to source of that feeling and hit it within a metre.
“Well whatever it was, you looked scared.” Shawn raked one hand back through his thick, black hair. “So I thought maybe it wasn’t the best time. But since then you’ve not said anything about it. It can’t be that bad?” He tugged on her arm, not roughly, but the same way one might tug on the lead of a reluctant puppy.

Thanks folks! I’ll try to get round to more of you this week, since work has calmed down a little. No promises though, since if I get any more work in I’ll have to give that priority. *waves* see you round!

Here are the other bloggers taking part, by the way. Be sure to drop by and say hello!
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http://caitlinsternwrites.wordpress.com/
http://ileandrayoung.com
http://jennykellerford.wordpress.com

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