RS: I Haz Planz 28/05


I’m bliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiind! *runs about madly*

No, not really, but it feels that way. Sprog1 gave me his conjunctivitis and this week has been the toughest because every time I look at the screen my vision blurs. Hell, any time I look at anything my vision blurs. I’ve been far more comfortable this week with my eyes closed.

. . . And yet I’ve watched more Buffy and Angel than I have the entire month to date.

Hmm. Go figure.

Anyway . . . !

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~Complete a further four chapters of US to UK English conversion on ‘Slippers & Chains: Sugar Dust’
Yep. Didn’t expect it to be done quite so easily, but I finished the whole thing. Once I realised what the key culprits were, ‘find/replace’ became my new best buddy. Then it was simply a case of smoothing out wrinkles. Tell you what though; I found three glaring typos in the manuscript that made me just want to hang my head and sob. I mean . . . the book was for sale. Then again . . . mixing up ‘compliment’ and ‘complement’ is easily done if not paying attention. It did make me a bit slower on the read-through though, which can only be a good thing!

~Send x3 review requests for ‘MEO:TFS’
Yep. All sent. Dunno if I’ll get responses for them or even if the messages will be opened, but I won’t know unless I keep putting the work out there. Someone will bite soon, right?

Activities For This Week

  1. Send x3 review requests for ‘MEO:TFS’
  2. Format Sugar Dust for paperback release

Thoughts…

I got a response from one of my beta readers for ‘Second Base’ at the beginning of the week. She had some great comments to make and picked up some important errors, so it will be fun to go through and sort those out when the time comes. It’s also important, methinks to start worrying about how I’m going to release the whole of the ‘Slippers & Chains’ series. Obviously it would have been to Breathless Press’ schedule before, but now it’s on mine. I need to take my time and pace them out so there aren’t huge gaps in between each release. I think six months is a good gap, right? Right? o.O

In other news, have you been following the twory on Twitter? If you’re unfamiliar with the word, I’m talking about the story Ileandra and I have been telling 140 characters at a time, one post a day. It’s our usual style – when you stick us in the same room – silly with a bit of rib-jabbing, but with a core story that outlines what we’re both going to be doing when our current projects are over.

If you haven’t seen it yet there are three more days to go before the tale ends. You can find it by visiting @ileandraXraven on Twitter and checking all posts this month at 10:30am. Failing that . . . I’ll collate the story here when it’s over so you can read it in one yummy chunk.

Right, that’s my lot. Guess I’d better stick more of that lovely antibiotic ointment into my eyes and go lie down. -_- Ugh . . .

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RS: Guest Spotlight – Raven McAllen


Presenting Raven McAllen!

I love doing this. It’s great opening the floor to other authors and sharing them with you. Do join me in welcoming Raven McAllen, a fine super-smexxy lady with a great name 😉

Today she’s given us a look into her latest offering ‘Taken Identity’, re-releasing with Totally Bound. Go, go, go, Raven!

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Thank you for offering to host me on your blog today. Even though this is all about someone stealing your identity I promise I won’t steal yours (I may use your name in a book though).

About ‘Taken Identity’

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When the devastatingly handsome Gray turns up on her doorstep looking for his wife, and calling said wife by Jules name, Jules wondered briefly if she’d landed in an alternative universe. She knows she’s not his wife, and so does he. But apparently someone with her name and history is.
Is it a case of coincidence or did his missing wife ‘borrow’ Jules’ life?
Even though the dominant Gray sends her knickers aflame with just one look, with a missing wife in the equation, Jules knows there’s no chance of finding out what else he could achieve.
There’s only one thing to do—unravel the mystery and try and keep their hands off each other in the meantime. The first may well prove far easier than the latter.

‘Taken Identity’ Excerpt

Jules walked into the restaurant, her long, tanned legs—courtesy of a certain fake tanning spray—bare, and her feet encased in vertiginous straps that could loosely be called shoes, that she hoped to hell she wouldn’t fall off of. Shoes this high were not made for walking. Showing off legs, looking sexy—she hoped—but not for putting one foot in front of the other and moving. Her short, floaty dress, she prayed hinted at—rather than showed—her body and she’d kept her makeup minimal. She might want a certain part of his anatomy to sit up and beg, but she didn’t want to make it too obvious. She still hadn’t made her mind up if she was stupid, or lacking sense because she fancied the socks off him.

Probably both.

Gray stood up as Jules entered the restaurant and walked towards where he waited. She tried to stop herself from drooling. If she’d thought he was drop-dead gorgeous that morning, when he was tired and irritable—well, she’d been deluding herself. Be still, my heart, she thought flippantly as she took in every last, luscious inch of him.

Bloody hell. I sound like a corny, cheesy chic flick, but sheesh, the man’s dynamite without even trying. Heaven help any woman if he turns on the charm. Seen from a distance, he was pulse jumping. Up close, he was heart attack material. Just that lazy smile, those deep, dark eyes and that sexy mouth were enough to get a girl’s pussy eager for action. And if you added in that tight butt and toned body? Oh my. Jules mentally fanned herself.

She tried not to let any of her X-rated thoughts show as she allowed him to lead her to a deep comfy sofa. The hostess took her serape, and with a slight nod of thanks she held on to the bit of satin and ribbon laughingly called an evening clutch, which held her phone, keys and what her mother called ‘mad money’. Not money to spend madly, but to spend if she or her date got mad and she needed a taxi. A wise woman, her mother. Although she’d never needed to use it yet and didn’t think this would be the first time. She’d tucked the twenty-pound note and a credit card firmly in the inside, zippered pocket of the tiny bag. Jules didn’t go as far as her mum suggested by pinning the note inside her bra. She wasn’t that paranoid.

“Right on time,” she said lightly, as they followed the maître d’ to an intimate bar area. She was impressed and showed it. Jules thought there was no point in dissembling. If you appreciated something, why not show it? “Bloody hell, you are pulling out all the stops.” Nerves and excitement made her chatter nonstop. “Tables are like hen’s teeth here. How on earth did you manage to get a reservation?”

He gave a ghost of a smile. “Insider information. Jeff and I were at school together. I’m part owner of the restaurant.”

Jules considered his statement. Obviously a man of means, which from the top of the range Mercedes she had seen driving away from her gate earlier, to the material and cut of his suit, she had already deduced.

“What do you do for a living?” she asked. “You know what I do, where I live, the fact that I have an impersonator—who may or may not be going to get me into deep, er, um…trouble. But apart from your name, I know next to nothing about you. And as it’s your not-yet-ex-wife who is the one causing any not-yet-seen problems, a wee bit of info wouldn’t be amiss.”

She watched him consider his words. Did he know his nose crinkled when he was deep in thought?

Finally, he spoke. “I’m a businessman. I have very diverse interests, all over the world.”

Jules waited, but the clam impression continued. Well, that tells me a lot. Info central he isn’t. “Hence the restaurant and your visit to Melbourne?” She did her best to prompt him.

“Hence the restaurant and my visit to Melbourne,” he said, and then he gave his drink order to the wine waiter. “Champagne now and the rest I’ll choose when we decide on our meal. Thank you.”

So that, Jules my girl, is all you are going to get, she thought, as he made no move to expound further. A smiling youth of around twenty came over to them and handed a set of keys to Gray. Jules tried not to look as if she wanted to know who he was and why he had what must be Gray’s car keys.

“Jeff’s nephew. I have him on the car hire insurance, so he can help me when needed.”

Obviously he had noticed.

“He’s parked the car and will drive us both back tonight. As a result, I can have a glass of champagne with you.”

Jules looked up at him, not commenting on the inference that they would drive home together, but noticing the way his body moved under the superbly fitted suit as he pocketed the keys.

“Who says I want champagne?” She felt a frisson of excitement run down her spine as he smiled back.

“Oh, I’m sure you’ll manage a glass or two. To toast our, shall we say, collaboration?”

I’m a goner. Done and gone. Collaborated, under, over, anywhich way, I’m your girl. And you are the man. Think, Jules, and not with your hormones. Use your brain. Ask him if he’s spoken to his investigator person.

“Of course.” He answered her question, one eyebrow raised as if to signify his surprise that she’d ever doubted him. “Before I flopped for an hour due to sleep depravation—or tried to. You didn’t make it easy.”

His twinkling eyes made Jules think her first impression—and every one since—had been spot on. Sex on legs!

“Me?” She tried to look innocent, but inside she was shouting, Yay!

“You, and those damn legs to your armpits, and that secret smile you have. I’ve been in a permanent state of arousal since I met you.”

She risked a quick glance towards his crotch. A definite outline of a hard cock showed beneath the material that covered it, and she swore it moved.

“Yeah.” He noticed her look. “Don’t worry. I won’t try to do anything about it—yet. Be warned… When I do, you’ll know about it. It won’t be easy, and you’ll need to be very sure it’s what you want.”

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Is it what you want, Jules? Is it?!

Thanks for stopping over with us today, Raven and thanks for leaving us with such a great excerpt. Remember guys, head over to Totally Bound to pick up Raven’s title soon. You’ll not be disappointed!

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IY: Mah Plans 25/05


I’m finding it hard to think right now. I don’t really want to do anything and, given that today is a bank holiday, I’ve found it hard to get much done. Oh, and I have conjunctivitis. Yey! -_-

On a brighter note, I haven’t spent all day watching what ‘Silk Over Razor Blades’ is doing. No, no, I’ve been working instead on ‘Walking The Razor’s Edge’ since keeping up the momentum of this release is not a bad thing!

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checking off feedbackEdit five chapters of ‘Walking The Razor’s Edge’ – skip the parallel timeline and focus first on the contemporary line in Leicester
Eeeerm. Four. And they’ve been largely rewritten from the ground up. I knew this was going to be a problem and even though it reads better with this (rather drastic) changes I’ve been slowed down considerably. Perhaps it’s better this way. The pace is already stronger and the sub plots more inciting. As well as that I’ve been able to cut back on all the useless verbiage in earlier chapters which, though it was pleasant for me, would have sucked arse for a reader. So good things are happening, that’s for sure!

Activities For The Week

So . . . here we go again!

  • Edit five chapters of ‘Walking The Razor’s Edge’ – skip the parallel timeline and focus first on the contemporary line in Leicester
  • Send out review copies of ‘Silk Over Razor Blades’ to those who have asked
  • Send five review request emails

Thoughts…

I need to get back in the groove here. Not just writing, but talking about my words. chat image The event Raven did on Thursday was a great chance for her to chat about what she’s been doing, but I still need to be pushing for views here. Having the novel out is all well and good but I want people to read it. So I need to make sure they know about.

Same old, same old, really.

Then, next week, when I know more about what position I’m in with ‘Walking The Razor’s Edge’ I’ll be in a better position to jiggle my plans for what remains of the year.

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IY: Silk Over Razor Blades – Out Now!


This is it. The time has finally come! ‘Silk Over Razor Blades’ first novel in my ‘Saar’s Legacy’ trilogy is now available to the general public. You can find it:

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Amazon in ebook or paperback forms

Thank you so very much for staying with me and being so very supportive and kind over the last few months. I can’t explain what this means to be (and I’m supposed to be a wordsmith!). Just know that I’m grateful to each and every one of you and that your kind words, listening ears and supportive words will not be forgotten. ^_^

Now, rather than gush about this I think I’ll just leave you with an excerpt from the tale:

Lenina stood outside her house, blinking at the warm glow in the windows through diagonal sheets of rain. She hugged herself and chewed her bottom lip. Though it bled, filling her mouth with sweetness, an hour of aimless wandering served to deaden the taste.

Standing over the body, Lenina had struggled with what to do next. The rational and law-abiding side of her demanded that she pull out her mobile and call the police.

The rest of her, coupled with the fight or flight reflex successfully keeping humans alive for millions of years, had other ideas. That part instructed her to hide the body. Anywhere. Quickly.

She wrestled with it at first. Guilt and fear crippled her thoughts. Then, on the far side of the park she saw three strangers hurrying through the rain beneath a trio of umbrellas.

Risk of discovery made the decision for her.

Lenina grabbed the woman by the legs and dragged her across the grass.

Her damp, cold hands struggled with the dead weight, eventually forcing her to heave the woman on to her shoulder.

That, by contrast, was easy. Lenina paused to marvel at her new strength.

She hid the body beyond a cluster of bushes in a corner of the park, pushing it into a deep hollow that had once formed a pond. Shielded by evergreen shrubs, she hoped it wouldn’t be found until she could decide what to do.

The dog she threw in as an afterthought.

Now, far from the park and back on the familiar paving slabs of her own driveway, Lenina stared at her house and wondered if she could enter.

Was it even her house any more? Did vampires and murderers deserve to live in beautiful, semi-detached properties in a quiet corner of the East Midlands? Did they have fiancés? Could they get married?

She didn’t think so, but neither did she think she could stay outside any longer.

Locking herself in the bathroom, she peeled off her wet clothes and left them on the floor, climbing into the bath to stand under the shower. In a curious mirroring of the night before, she let the hot water sluice blood and tears off her face and hands.

Steam filled the room, white and thick, hiding everything until Lenina felt lost and adrift.

The bandage on her neck flapped loose, useless against all the water.

She peeled it away, puzzling over how the events of the day had numbed even physical pain. But when her hands brushed the skin at the base of her throat she stopped and scrambled out of the bath.

With shaking hands, she cleared condensation off the mirror, a long smear across the glass through which she could see.

The bite marks were gone.

Her skin still dripping, Lenina perched on the edge of the bath and stared at the floor. Despite the water all over her body, the insides of her mouth felt as dry as sand.

It took several minutes, but eventually she convinced herself to have another look.

The result was unchanged.

The skin of her neck and shoulder were as smooth as they had been at the beginning of the week. No teeth marks, no bruising. On her face, the faint scratches from the park woman’s clawing fingernails were gone too. The only sign of any mark at all, was a thin red scratch from the point of Jason’s dagger.

In a distant way she recalled Saar, the Egyptian soldier from her dreams, telling his men that he could heal any injury. That he was strong and so too were they.

Lenina sighed. Bit her lip.

No more hiding. No more stalling. She knew what she had to do.

Squee!

And for the sake of those of you who missed it, here is the blurb:

Lenina Miller, ditsy and pampered bride to be, wants nothing more than to walk down the aisle in her scandalous red dress to the gasps and awed stares of friends and family. Her plans are shattered when a late night mugging not only scars her face and neck, but drops her in the centre of a frenzied police investigation to apprehend the attacker before he strikes again.

On the field of battle in 30 BC, Saar, son of Yafeu, sacrifices his life for his sovereign, Queen Cleopatra VII of Egypt. Betrayed by the man he loves, forced to watch his country burn under Octavian’s hostile takeover, Saar’s agonising death appears to Lenina with all the lucid force of a true memory.

Two lives, separated by thousands of years, brought together through one night of violence.

Haunted by the memories of a man long dead, Lenina finds her body transforming, her appetites for food and flesh magnified to terrifying proportions. As the attentions of the investigating detective force her to choose between lust and love, Lenina also finds herself a target. The vampire who attacked her knows she survived and will stop at nothing to finish the job he started.

 

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RS: I Haz Planz 21/05


Soooo back at work for a week, how have I gotten on?

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~Approach photographer buddies for photoshoot that can be used for the ‘Slippers & Chains’ series cover art.
Yes. And yes she can help me out! Not sure when we’ll be shooting yet but there’s no huge rush to do so because . . .

~Convert at least half of ‘Slippers & Chains: Sugar Dust’ back to UK English (ha!)
Nope! Two chapters in. Maybe three. I think I underestimated just how much different US English is to UK English. I need to take my time to make sure I catch everything.

~Send x3 review requests for ‘MEO:TFS’
Ahaaaaaaaaaa, no. -_- I blame the fact that The Sprogs were in the house yesterday instead of at nursery, but excuses don’t get the job done! Never mind that I’ve lost a day of work to wiping snotty noses, cleaning sticky eyes and applying various meds to a pair of three-year-olds that would rather stick their hand in my bra than keep still. *sigh*

Activities For This Week

  1. Complete a further four chapters of US to UK English conversion on ‘Slippers & Chains: Sugar Dust’
  2. Send x3 review requests for ‘MEO:TFS’

Thoughts…

It’s nearing the end of the month now so I should bet getting ‘Second Base’ back from my beta readers shortly. Given that I’m still working on ‘Sugar Dust’ it will be nice to just leave that to one side for the moment.

Oh and I’m doing some reading tonight so I need to get myself in the right headspace for that. Actually, looking at the time I’m already done, aren’t I? Ha, hope you liked it! 😉

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