More Six Sentence goodness on another busy Sunday!
As I’ve been doing for the past few weeks, here is another sample from my A-Z of flash fiction. This week its ‘F’ and the trigger word for this piece was Father. This one has actually been critiqued with the Phoenix Writers and is very really ready for submission. Not sure where I’ll send it yet, but I’m quite excited about it. I’ll have to trim it just a tiny bit more though, if I want to query it as Flash.
~Jake unexpectedly meets and old friend…
The golden bracelet burned his wrist, a powerful contrast to the cold sweat trickling down his back. “Good morning, Mark,” Jake replied, proud at how steady his voice sounded, “good to see you.”
“And you… how are you?”
“Content,” he lowered his gaze to the floor.
“Good.”
A pause extended between them.
And there we are!
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Ooh –I want to know why the bracelet’s burning his wrist! Flash always teases me. There’s always a story there and I want to know more. 🙂
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I love the teasing you get with snippets of flash. This piece, in particular, is a mega tease with sentences like the ones I’ve picked.
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He doesn’t seem very content! 😉 They must have quite the history for him to react like that!
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😉
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