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Continuing with my A-Z of flash fiction theme, I’m now on the letter ‘C’ and the trigger word for this piece was Car.
~With a character taken from The Ice Wolf Tavern, a woman from a fantasy world comes face to face with a vehicle she has never seen the like of before!
The second of the beasts sprang from nowhere.
Diavian had no time to scream, much less move; throwing up her hands as the massive white eyes bore down on her, bringing heat with it and a loud angry roar.
There was a high pitched squeal, then the beast lurched to one side, swerving madly across the path until it crashed, nose first, into the rail on the right hand side. The nose of the beast burst open, writhing smoke pouring from what looked to be one large nostril beneath a thin, square lid.
“HA!” Diavian bellowed, leaping to her feet and waving her fist.
Intense action and emotion in this six. You can feel Diavian’s triumph as well. Well done!
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Ta very much. 🙂 I’m looking forward to editing the whole piece of flash actually; its one of my favs. As soon as its done I’ll get it up here.
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Wow! Intense six!
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Many thanks. 🙂
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Diavian is fearless. What an image you painted with this wolf monster. Lots of energy and action. Great stuff!!
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Thank you!
Diavian is one of my favourite characters, I want to write more about her – she hasn’t the sense to be scared! :-p
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