Six Sentence Sunday 25/03 (7)


Well! Last week caused such interest (thank you everybody!!! *very, very happy face*) that I can’t do anything other than give you the next six sentences of ‘The First Time.’

Let me know what you think, peeps. ^_^

“Are you awake?”

The shape rolled over, a corner of the sheets sliding back over smooth skin to reveal a single erect nipple, dark and pebble hard. I stared, thankful for the open curtains and the moonlight which streamed through; painting the object of my longing pale silver.

My mouth grew dry.

“I’m awake,” she said. And then; “its cold, Vicky, come to bed.”

So… there we are!

Does that perhaps help to explain a little of the panic, or give you even more to think about? Hehee, more next week, and for now I’ll leave you in the hands of a wonderful selection of writers also taking part in Six Sentence Sunday. Click the banner to find their work.

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About Ileandra Young

I'm a thirty-*mumbles* year old (purple loving, cheese worshipping) author of fantasy, juggling a pair of beautiful twin boys with my burning desire to make up stories and write them all down. When I get the chance, I play games, listen to music, and in days long past I even ran a radio show. Though I occasionally write non-fiction, my heart lives in fantasy and my debut novel, Silk Over Razor Blades is now available through Amazon along with part two of the trilogy, Walking The Razor's Edge.
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11 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday 25/03 (7)

  1. Cate Masters says:

    Nice description and emotion.

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  2. Aha! I think I understand the panic now! 🙂

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  3. gayleramage says:

    First time reading this – I wonder if she’ll take her up on her offer. 😀

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  4. Janey Falls says:

    Wow – beautiful imagery!! Great six!

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