With the coming of NaNoWriMo 2011 all I can think about is what my next project is going to be. Well… along with some other stuff too; but I prefer thinking about writing; its a lot more fun!
And the ideas I have so far are enough to keep me buzzing, but part of the problem I have is that I don’t know how to begin them.
After all… how do you start a novel? It is a novel we’ll all be writing next month, though I feel that the starting rules can be the same (in some degree) for both a novel and a short story. The general (very good rule) is to start with strong sentences that grab the reader’s attention and invite them to stay with you for the duration of the book.
Well that sounds like a fantastic idea! Its a great starting formula and there are, in my opinion quite a few ways to do that. These are some of the ways I’ve seen and they all seem to work pretty well.
Start With Speech
Place your reader right in the middle of an argument or a confessional. Start with something that makes a reader demand; ‘What the hell are they saying that for?’
‘Mum, I’m gay.’
‘Its too much, Emma. I’m leaving.’
‘I heard them screaming in my dreams; but when I woke up, I realised it was me screaming all along.’
People talking, perhaps to themselves, perhaps to someone else, but before you get so much as a page into the book there is more you want to know more about. Starting with speech is a good way to draw readers directly into the space of the story, but then it depends on what comes next as to how long they stay there.
Start With An Action
Place your reader in the middle of something that is happening to your characters. Exposition and background can (and should) come later, but to open your novel/short story, you want to show the reader that something worth reading about is happening within the pages.
Fred leaned down, extending his arm through the open double doors to the red-eyed child huddled at the bottom of the lift.
Sheryl slammed the door behind her, marching away from the house, her husband, her children, her life.
The hooded stranger twirled the dagger skilfully through his fingers, a playful smile dancing across his shadowed lips.
An action gives a reader immediate pace and, if played right, touches on that natural curiosity in each and every one of us.
The ice cold wind chased flakes of snow across the barren hills, rimmed in the moon’s soft silver.
Moisture dripped from the cracked stone ceiling, pooling at the base of the cramped metal cell and its single sobbing occupant.
The purple moon sank fast, dipping below its blue-hued twin as the last light of the night faded on the planet Xanthir.
If its important for you to place a story quickly (like for a short story, or for flash fiction) then this is probably one of the better ways to do it. Its incredibly important for your reader to understand when/where you are when they start, otherwise its very difficult for them to connect with your piece. However, if you have more time to spend on revealing that, then I’m not sure this style suits.
Meh… anyway, that’s what I think and when November 1st comes along, I’ll have to pick one of these to kick off my novel. Whichever idea I end up taking forward. o.O