#NaNo Update: Week One


Oh dear. Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear!

I knew it would be hard this year, but I had no idea HOW hard. My current NaNo word count: 2,523.
sad face stylised emoticon I’m fairly certain that I should be at about 15k by now, if I were keeping up to the daily targets. *sigh* It’s a very odd sensation, particularly since I can’t exactly blame the boys for how I feel. I just haven’t had the motivation to do much writing this past week. In fact the last time I sat at the keyboard and managed to write anything at all was Sunday. Not great.

I’m reminding myself that I have been ill, looking after the boys who keep changing up their schedules and handling multiple visits from various family members. All these does conspire to make it hard to write, but I’m not going to ‘blame’ those things. I’ll just say that this past week has been a little bit of a write off and that I need to do better.

Not with mounds of pressure though. I promised myself that I wouldn’t get stressed, and that I would take it easy, been as there are much more important things to be looking after. So far I have kept to that, though I must admit I do feel somewhat odd that I haven’t added any figures to the NaNo counter over the last few days. I remember the relish I felt in years passed at watching the numbers rise. We’ll see if I can catch up. If not, then any words I get down I should consider a win, considering my current circumstances.

Heh, check me out; being all reasonable and realistic and stuff! :p

Anyway, here’s a quick excerpt from what I have written. I want to keep you all in the loop since you were so kind as to pick the story for me. :p

“Put your leg over his shoulder. Yes, yes, like that. Now pout!”
The instructions, loud and crackling over the PA made Cerise’s lips twitch. She followed the order and extended her leg, pushing with her heel until the sole of her foot brushed passed the side of Malcolm’s head. He winked at her. “How are you?”
“Cramped.” She muttered.
“Not long now.”
Cerise shifted her bottom. “Can you move your hand?”
“Where?”
“I’m going to fall.”
Malcolm obligingly slid his left hand along her thigh. “Better?”
“Yes, ta.”
White flood lights chased shadows out of the warehouse and illuminated the furniture edges with a bright glow. Beneath it all lay Cerise, her body artfully draped over Malcolm’s. Both were naked but for a thin film of sweat, occasionally topped up by crew members with a sparing spritz from a clear spray bottle.
Make up crew swarmed like flies, adjusting lipstick, dusting with powder, smearing a dash of colour. One even went as far as to flick a soft, puffy brush at the underside of her breasts.
Cerise fought the urge to sneeze. “I’m getting a cramp.”
“Okay, we’re set!” Sam slid into place behind the camera. “Rehearsal!”
Grateful that this particular fantasy required no lines, Cerise concentrated on moving her body in a realistic manner. While rehearsals didn’t need any real penetration positioning was important. She rolled her hips around and tipped her head back, letting her hair fan across the pillows.
Malcolm grunted and buried his face in her neck, stroking her thighs and giving a little moan. “Are you sure you don’t want me to fix that tap?”
“No… its my plumbing that needs work.” The laugh bubbled up before she could snatch it back. Cerise snorted, peering at Malcolm through her lashes. “Do you have to say it like that? Noob!”
He pulled away, rolling off the bed and snapping his fingers to get the attention of his assistant. The woman ran over to him waving a dressing gown, helping him into it with her face averted.
Cerise watched him. “Sorry, sorry! Again?”
“No,” he snapped. “I need a break.” He stalked away.
She ran her fingers back through her hair, dragging the curly strands off her cheeks. “Damn.”
“Don’t worry about him,” one of the producers gave her a kind smile. “He’s had a rough day.”
“What about me?” Cerise gnawed her bottom lip. “I’m the one who has to pull all the acrobatic tricks.”
“Take five, hon.”
“Whatever.” She hopped off the bed, kicking aside the plunger and monkey wrench lying on the sheets and walking off the set.
Goosepimples broke out on her skin as she left the warmth of the lights. She shrugged into her own dressing gown, held out by a freckle faced assistant and helped herself to a pair of fluffy slippers.
“Have I got time to log in?” She asked.
The producer glanced at his watch. “Take half an hour. Why not.”
With that go ahead, Cerise aimed for her trailer.

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The Book Fairy


yellow light bulb, bright ideaI have a lot of books. They’re spilling out of various orifices and taking up too much space in my house. As much I love every single one, it’s time to admit that I just can’t give them all a home. Not if I want them to be looked after in the way I feel all books should be.

So… I have an idea.

I’m going to donate my books!

But not in a boring way, like to a charity shop or a car book sale. Oooh no!
I’m going to don a cape, fuzzy pink boots and a long, sparkly wand and develop a brand new alter ego. I am

THE BOOK FAIRY!

black and white fairy with wand
Travelling the city, leaving books in strategic locations for the enjoyment of the masses.

The idea came to me a couple of weeks ago and it hasn’t let go since. So… I’ll be doing prep work. Each book that I ‘donate’ will have its own stamp, or placard. It will explain that the book is a gift and that the book is designed to be passed on. I’ll also arrange a feedback form here so readers can interact with the fairy and maybe even make requests.

This idea is still in its early stages, but soon I’ll have a list of books that are about to be released into the big, wide world. Watch this space! ^_^

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Six Sentence Sunday 04/11 #39


It’s November. It’s NaNoWriMo time! I must admit I’m finding this year much harder than previous years, not so much because of the babies, but my own motivation just isn’t there. For some reason I’m really struggling with the story. So I’m a bit behind on my word count.

Nonetheless, I do have some sentences for you this week, pulled straight from the WIP Peep Show.

Cerise has come home with her friend Malcolm to enjoy a coffee before going their separate ways. She, like many of us, seems resigned to the fact that some things just don’t get fixed.

Cerise led the way to her flat on the third floor, trudging up the stairs.

“When are they going to fix the lift?” Graham huffed, holding onto the hand rail.

Cerise snorted. “It’s been three years. Don’t hold your breath.”

Yeah… I feel her pain.

Now, I’m not on the lists for Six Sunday this week, but there are plenty of other talented folk you can find by clicking the banner link below. Go on… you know you wanna!
Six Sentence Sunday

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Show Don’t Tell


This piece of advice comes up again and again and again. In fact I’m sick of hearing it. While I was working on SORB my brain was filled with a litany that sounded something like this:
Show don’t tell, avoid repetition, use a stronger verb, drop that adverb. Show don’t tell, avoid repetition, use a stronger verb, drop that adverb. Show don’t tell, avoid repetition, use a stronger verb, drop that adverb.

Even though the cynic in me can’t help but point out that this umbrella piece of advice can’t possibly be suitable for every situation, I do acknowledge that my writing is a hell of a lot stronger as a result of keeping the phrase in mind. Which is nice. ^_^

So… from the view point of a person who hasn’t had any sort of ‘training’ in my chosen field :p I want to let you know what this means for me.

Showing how a character feels is a great deal stronger than simply telling the reader. My role, as a writer, is to immerse my reader fully into the story I’m telling and to do that, the five senses play an incredible role. I want you reader to feel, hear, see, smell and taste everything along with my characters.

So a sentence that looks like this:

Johnny was tired and cold.

Can turn into:

Johnny sighed, chaffing his arms with both hands. When he shivered, a trail of goosebumps prickled into being beneath his trembling fingers. Small puffs of white billowed from his lips as he opened his mouth in a yawn that split his jaw.

Yes, the second version is wordier, but its a good sort of wordy. The goosebumps down his arms, his shivers. Those are clues into how cold he is and if that’s not enough there’s the condensation from his mouth when he yawns; a traditional indicator of fatigue.

For some reason I was up for two hours at some point in the night thinking about all this. Probably because my head was filling up with plans for NaNo. I should really put thoughts like this to one side, mostly, since I’m working on a first draft, but having thoughts like this in the back of my mind will make the process of editing easier later. At least I hope.

What sort of tips do you keep in mind while writing your first draft? Is show, don’t tell one of your favourite pieces of advice, or are there others that you follow?

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My 2012 NaNoWriMo Is….


Ok! The votes are in and I’m pleased to say that the winner is:

Peep Show!

Comedy horror in the form of an erotic dancer haunted by the ghost of one of her clients. It’s been a while since I wrote anything quite like this so I’m really looking forward to it. Woo!

Thanks you all for voting, I’m now going to be busy making sure I have a plan down, or at least an outline. Its not my usual method – I’m a pantser of the purest kind! – but because this year I’m going to have less time overall, I want to know where I’m heading.

So the next day or two I’m going to spend putting the ideas together and making sure I know who the characters are. Ooooh, I’m really excited now.

Bring on Thursday! ^_^

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