Another Six Sentence Sunday! I love this. 😀
Behold! Another six sentences from Silk Over Razor Blades, the piece currently on the look out for willing beta readers. This time following a slightly later part of the story and another character. Bwa ha ha ha ha haa ah a hahaa!
Every fibre of his body sang with an ecstasy so powerful that his throat temporarily closed off. His heart rate rocketed. Purple stars danced across his sight and in his jeans a hot, sticky dampness began to spread.
Slipping down to his knees, Jason tried to ride the wave; struggled to regain control of his mind and wrest it back from the intruding stranger who was shouting, sobbing, now screaming as, miles away, they rode the intense upsurge of a devastating orgasm.
When the sensation dissipated, Jason found himself lying flat on the floor, his arms flung out wide, blood roaring in his ears. Clear sight returned by degrees; brightly coloured stars winking out to leave behind the muggy grey of the winter sky.
Wow, this really does reveal something to me about my writing style. Some of my sentences are uber long! May need to fiddle with that. o.O
Vivid description, well done!
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Many thanks! ^_^
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Oh, I love your voice in this, the way you turn this scene into such an evocative piece! Great job 🙂
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Thank you; I really enjoyed writing this scene!
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Goodness! He just got well and truly f*cked. Fun!
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Hell yeeeah! Lol.
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Great description and sense of the moment! Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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NOpe. That’s what makes tehe description so real and vivid for the reader…IMHO
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The sentences? Cool, thanks. 😀
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Wow! lol
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Hehee thanks. 🙂
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